文采班,第四堂。
上半場,練語感。
小孩子,要有臺風,要懂怎麼善用麥克風。
下半場,養文采。

昨晚下雨,教室有窗,我就信手拈珠兒。

You took your coat off and stood in the rain
You were always crazy like that
As I watched from my window, always felt I was outside
Looking in on you…

像張愛玲那種老天爺賞飯吃的,不算的話,
一個孩子要”學”文采,
我設計了簡單三部曲:

默、譯、改。

默寫經典,先累積肚子裡的”真材實料”。
翻譯默寫,確認自己有”正確理解”
改寫默寫,隨心活用”正確理解”後的”真材實料”

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默寫,得本體。
翻譯,轉外相。
改寫,起妙用。

(我這個臉圓圓的海撈法師寫到興起又起乩了)

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You took your coat off and stood in the rain
You were always crazy like that
脫了外套才跑去雨裡站著
你總是那麼瘋瘋的
He took his shoes off and stood in the sand
He is sometimes cozy like that

Wen took his guard off and gave out his hand
He’s always him like that

2017.2.23蕭文乾